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標題: 雅思考试想从小作文上拿高分,那么你需要了解这一点
要说雅思测验中哪一个part是最轻易赚分的，当属小作文莫属了。比起高文文的多样性和机动性，小作文的确布满了套路。

前面分享过若是写小作文的开首和末端，即su妹妹arize the main features，今天要跟大师分享若何展示你的比力意识，即make comparisons.

起首，咱们要找到哪里必要咱们作比力，哪些数据是标题中的relevant？数据图可以分为静态图和动态图，咱们就以这个分类来举行阐发。

静态图的比力相对于简略，就是统一时候内分歧图例之间的数字举行巨细比力，必要注重的是，比力要从多方面举行开展以包管谜底周全。

下面图表是《剑7》中，test1的表格题↓

这个表格便可以经由过程两个祛湿茶,角度开展举行数据比力：一是纵向开展，在统一种类下，各个国度的消费比例举行数据巨细比力；二婚宴,是横向开展，比力对某一国度而言，消费者在方方面面的消费比例。

而在写动态图时，要重点存眷图例和图例间的比力！不少烤鸭写着写着就会把小作文的重点方向某一特定图例的变革细节上，而疏忽了总体，把到时辰的分数拱手送人了。以《剑9》test4为例↓

“Consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31q in 2030, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q. ”

这是考官范文的节选，可以看出这段话中布满了图例之间的各类比力。但动态图不只有动态比力，另有静态比力！不少考官会把肇端值零丁列出来做静态比力，或再总结时比力数据的巨细特性。

仍是《剑7》，test2的考官范文就在起头描写变革趋向以前，先举行了一段肇端值的静态比力：

“In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). ”

找到要比力的位置后，咱们要学会若何比力？接下来给大师分享几种常见套路：

一、最高档

比力最值是小作文中常见的套路，这里就要用到一些最高档的表达：

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure and education category saw the lowest percentages.

二、比力级

在比力两个图例之间瓜葛的时辰，很多烤鸭们可能只是摆列了两个数据，但两者之间其实不存在比力瓜葛，如许写也是比力亏损的，如：

In 1993, the percentage of unemployed English living outside London was 18%, but the figure for those living in the capital was 22%.

进阶版写法：

In 1993, the percentage of unemployed English living outside London was 18%, but the figure for those living in the capital was 5% higher, at 22%.

3. 表比力的跟尾词

烤鸭们在写小作文的时辰，不要只顾着展示本身的比力意识，文章总体的布局仍是很首要的。当你既想暗示两者比力，又想使上下文跟尾得更天然时，可以试着用下面这些毗连词：

暗示@类%87hao%似或不%1whM1%异@时，用“Similarly, +句子.”

暗示相反或相异时，用“In/By contrast,+句子.”，或“while/ whereas” 毗连两个句子表比拟

e.g. Acid rain gases from the domestic sector and other industries fell gradually. In contrast, the transport sector saw a small increase in emissions.

The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%, while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.

4. 倍数/分数比力

e.g. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000.

e.g. Those who never dined in them and who dined in them every day accounted for less than a tenth of all people in the USA.

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