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玄月旬日的测验中，一个關于传统传承的问题冲破了本年测验命题中规中矩的纪律。虽然文化传承一向是雅思高文文测验的话题之一，可是纵观积年测验真题，不难發明其呈現的频率百里挑一。不巧的是，在这个秋夏之交的時節，它横空出生避世了。
北京举世教诲（原举世雅思）杨亮教员為你阐發考题以下：
Many countries are trying to improve the standard of living of their people through economic development. However, some people think that many customs and the traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20160910
虽然本题的题干部門内容比力清楚，可是仍是有不少考生在最起头审题阶段呈現了一些關头词的漏掉，实在本题中的一个词many是起到一个较為關头的感化的。
由于，若是想否認本题干的话，那末對應many的不過就是a few或龍虎,all。换句话说，若是笔者概念是彻底分歧意题干，那末笔者要證实的是只有一些或少量的传统要被摒弃，或是所有的传统都必要被传承或被摒弃。很较着，这个逻辑是极為欠好論證的。以是，在科場傍边考生彻底没有需要给本身任意增长测验难度，老诚实实地赞成题干便可。
参考文章以下：
In this present-day society, it seems that contradictions always exist between cultural and traditional inheritance and social advancement. Some people, accordingly, suggest that some customs and conventional behavioral norms should not emerge into people's modern life. Personally, I am completely on the side of what they argue.
首段的写法會商很深，經由過程布景描写引出题干的转写，随後清楚地表达了笔者的概念。这个开首段清楚了然，布局严谨。
Some ancient moral standards and traditions have formed due to the limited social resources that they could share. An instance in point is that a couple of hundred years ago, three or even four generations of Chinese in a huge family lived under one roof. Consequently, conflicts happened all the time because of generation gaps. The reason why people chose to live together as a large family was because older generations in the ancient society had not ability to make a decent living so that they needed support from their offspring. Definitely, in modern society with a sound welfare system, people are able to live in a small family unit with much more exhilaration.
主段一，在首痔瘡外用藥膏,句表达了笔者的論點一，既是这段的中间句。随後，笔者采纳了例證的方法来拓展这个論點。
由于文化和传统类的话题論證常常较為抽象，轻易使笔者在逻辑表达的時辰堕入窘境。是以，本文重點利用例證的方法。經由過程详细的例子来論證提出的論點，如许清楚了然，逻辑轻易被读者接管。
Worse, some other customs and traditions came into being because of people's wrong cognition to the world they were living in. Those traditions might include discriminations to some certain groups of people. In agricultural societies, females were not as productive as males, which led to the fact that men did have upper social status and women were not al粗腿雕塑,lowed to do many things that they were supposed to have rights to choose. Undoubtedly, in contemporary societies women have equal rights as men, and thus they can be treated fairly everywhere such as in education and employment.
主段二，总體布局和主段一类似，也是經由過程例證的方法来开展論點。由關乎男女不服等的風俗和传统来論證一些传统的构成源自人们對世界認知的毛病，乃至这些传统和風俗饱含了對特定人群的实在。细心考虑，这种風俗可不占少数。
To sum up, some traditions and cultures, if not most, are obviously incorrect, and with no doubt we must abandon them. On the other hand, there are also some others that we should pay every effort to pass down generation to generation, which can positively represent our time-honored culture and fine traditions of nations.
末端段，起首再次重申了笔者的概念，而且還表白了笔者對付一些踊跃的传统和風俗的必定。本段的第二句实则就是對應题干中的many，夸大其并不是是all風俗和举動规范都必要被摒弃。
传统和文化的传承类的标题一向比力困扰潔牙粉,考生，最重要的是論點难想。而且，即便找到論點也常常因為論點较為抽象不容易論證而影响了考生的最後得分。
以下几个相干标题，考生们可以操练阐發一下：
Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both and give your own opinion. 20110315
We have a mixture of people from different culture and ethnic groups in a country. Why? Is this a positive or negative development? 20121013
The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20130727
Traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on family and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20110623
以上就是举世教诲教员對9月雅思写作新题的阐發，但愿對雅思虑生有所帮忙。 |
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發表於 2021-3-30 17:13:53
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